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To My Dearest Peter Pan by ~DontSayILoveYou:iconDontSayILoveYou:



Dear Peter,
take me away.
take me so very far away,
to your never neverland,
so that i will never ever have to grow up.

My Dearest Peter Pan,
let me kiss the stars with you.
Let me kiss your rosy lips,
and let the stars witness my devotion
to the never-ending love
of my childhood.

My Dearest Peter,
i'm still waiting for you
to come through my window,
just as you did when i was a young babe.

Dear Mr. Pan,
i've waited and waited,
and i watch my window every night
just in hopes
that i'll see your mischevious shadow
lurking in on me,
as he did in those long ago days.

To My Dearest Mr. Peter Pan,
I don't think you're coming.
I've started to give up all hope
of ever seeing you again.
Never again will I be able to
caress your hand or kiss your soft lips.
I suppose this is where I say,
growing up can't be all bad.
Right?
I wish i could,
but i can't without lying to you.

This is addressed to a Mr. Peter Pan,
in hopes that someday,
he will come and sweep me off my feet.
I suppose that will only happen in my dreams.
But,
I am a dreamer,
and I think that's all I'll ever be.
©2004-2009 ~DontSayILoveYou
:icondontsayiloveyou:

Author's Comments

i just watched the new peter pan movie a couple days ago, and i seem to be completely fascinated by it. it has such an excellent concept. well..in my poem...it starts off..as me being a young kid..me in the shoes of wendy...and it's after i come home from never neverland...and i'm wanting so badly to go back...becuz being grown up isnt all its cracked up to be...and as the poem progresses, the greeting's become more and more formal, which shows i'm growing up. they go from "dear peter" to "this is addressed to a mr. peter pan" yeah...self explanatory

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:iconcupcake23:
This is fantastic. I love it :love: It has such a sense of fantasy but with reality. I like that a lot :nod: I love the feeling of this poem, of wanting something more in life, and that can go towards anything :D
:iconheffalump36:
I love peter pan!! this is so good. But you sould make a sequil where they meet again.
:iconskellington13rose:
I love this! :D
I love how you put yourself in Wendy's shoes and told it from your side. I agree...growing up isn't fun..it loses the fun and joy.

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I :heart:....
:damphyr:Daisuke Jigen: "I must've been posessed by the spirit of Steve McQueen."
:damphyr:Zaclonius: "Hakuna Matata."

:iconbishies-r-us: < Awesome!

:iconmansionfans: < When the crypt doors creek and the
:icontoshi-muffin:
How touching. Lovely transitions into adulthood~

I adore Peter...

--
You want to be my lover, You want to be my man;
I am a flower
And I hurt your hands
:iconpsychodoll:
I dont think you needed to explain that much what you did in the poem as it shows lovely, iv been in love with mr pan 4ever nad this poem its just a masterpiece in my neverland

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Tell me your dreams, i'll make them last forever...
:iconitami-chick:
aww...
i still leave my window open for peter pan!!!
:iconlittletwilightsoul:
That is amazing!!!
I love it!

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:typerhappy:

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:iconblackrose23:
Beautiful poem! :love:

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Cheer up and dry your damp eyes
and tell me when it rains
And I'll blend up that rainbow above you
and shoot it through your veins
~Rainbow Veins, Owl City

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